My goal for week 9

My goal for the week is the organization goal 

It is something I have never worked on it that is why I chose it  I want to spice things up.
It will help me to do paragraph that shows my ideas 
When I do a paragraph I should be linking words together  to make it more interesting
I don't skip lines in a paragraph so I should work on it 

My next goal is that structure and purpose   
I have not been using it know let's try 

I chose my ideas to fit my sentences

I include the main ideas to make  my sentence way better  

In my stories, I use languages to fit the story

My ideas are purposely to make all my stories better 

like they always say bigger better stronger power.     

goals

My Reading goals for this week is 

Sentences 

spelling 

So I chose Sentences because I need to stretch my sentences to
 make it better. On some lists, I need to spell them more correctly 
that's one of the reasons why I chose it. And also at my age, I should be using my more difficult words. When I hear something the world is telling me that sounds like something that is worth listing to so I put it down and that's why  I chose to do Sentences. Spelling Is the key to typing and so people know you're on the same page.I need to use my powers to make it make sence.Every time we make a story I need to make it so people know what I am saying in sted of people saying the to complex.
I need to strech my sentences out so I make it better.I use serten sentences to match my words.

school report

student report comment

I'm proud of my reading because I enjoy it and it helps me in the future.

What I  find hard in math is that new things make me lose confidentes in my self, so I say to myself I will get there in the end with a little bit of help and get nudged to the finish.

My dad is a parts man and he sells oil he reads lots of contracts and emails to get the oil from Greece to NZ and it is hard so when I grow older I want to be just like my dad when I grow I want to be like him just like him.

I need to improve on art because it is garbage If I want to be a person who knows art I need to practice on it.

story line online

There was a nice boy his name was Wilfred Gordon  Mcdonald partridge, he lived next to an old people home he would always hang out with them they all had something about them that would make them their self. one day his parents were talking about the person that Wilfred liked so much ms nace

Reflect on my goals

My punctuation goal for deeper features this week was to...

For punctuation, I need to keep my Ideas original, When I did my tiger samurai I kept my ideas simple and did not go over the top.

 I need to sometimes reflect to relate on my stroys like the tiger samurai It reminded me of when I and my dad went to find an animal in a bush like a hedgehog or a possum we jumped over a fence and rolled through bushes and that gave me an idea about that story. I need to work on more stuff to relate to.

In my stories, I pick my ideas deliberately so it shows a real story and also to impress the reader. 

goal setting

Everyone is good at lots of things so I want to join them.

On the first day of school, we had to write a story about Tiger samurai at I thought I used lots of punctuation but  I looked at it earlier in the year I looked at it and I thought WOW I could do better so my goal is to use more punctuation.

On the first day of the year of school, we had to make a story about a person and a tiger so used my imagination and I looked at it and I thought It was actually pretty good but now I'm older I have more ideas so when I make a story I want to use more imagination to make my storeys my interesting.