We are a year 7 and 8 class at Pompallier Catholic School my teacher is Whaea Danni.
Really good start Raidon, you need to work on adding more descriptive language to paint a better picture for your reader.
Good job Raidon I like how much information you put in.
Really good start Raidon, you need to work on adding more descriptive language to paint a better picture for your reader.
ReplyDeleteGood job Raidon I like how much information you put in.
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