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Thursday, 11 June 2020

The Lighthouse

IN class we have been learning about Narrative writing and we watched a video about a problem in the light house and how the problem was solved. Here is how I summarized the animation.

2 comments:

  1. Really good start Raidon, you need to work on adding more descriptive language to paint a better picture for your reader.

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  2. Good job Raidon I like how much information you put in.

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